Outline

Topic - Homosexual

Thesis - Homosexuals who are victims of capitalism have a right to be accepted in society, also, people need to learn the way to accept them.

B1. Why do people entertain antipathy against homosexuals?

M1. Homosexual was a victim of capitalism.
- Capitalism is an economic and politcal system in which property, business, and industry are owned by private individual not by the state.
- Industry and business needed labors, lots of labors.
- They were looking for what could make manpower abundant.
- They also found what disturb their business.
M2. John Stuart Mill said, "When commercial capital occupies a position of unquestioned ascendancy, it everywhere constitutes a system of plunder."
- Because of homosexuals, birth rate decreased.
- Homosexual became the target of criticism.
- When businesses blamed homosexuals, they hoarded their intention. - They rationalized their stand point.
M3. There is the saying that popular opinion is the greatest lie in the world.
- Homosexual has had been criticized.
- For example, there is the rumor that Homosexual causes AIDS.
- Because of groundless rumor, people have had a down on them.
- Business should bear that to love each other can't be regarded as a practical act in mind.

B2. Accept the culture diversity.

M1. Variety is, as the proverb says, the spice of life.
- In today's age of globalization, various people come into existence.
- For instance, in Korea, they eat dogs, in otherwise, in France, frenches eat snails.
- World is getting to keep an eye on people who have their own unique character.
- Exclusive attitude only makes themselves isolated.
M2. Why can only homosexual be an exception to this rule?
- Homosexual is not out of mark.
- There is precedent for this kind of love.
- An example of ancient Greece.
- Culture can not be judged by subjective point of view.
M3. Homosexuals have a right to live happily with their lover.
- To love someone is natural and blessed .
- For example, a wedding is congratulated.
- Homosexual love is exactly same thing to be blessed.
- There should be people's concern and care.

B3. How does people support homosexuals in concrete way?

M1. "A law is a law, however undesirable it may be.", said Socrates.
- The law is system of rules that a society of government develops in order to deal with crime, business agreements, and social relationships.
- Sometimes, things are compelled by law under the necessity.
- As national, they have a duty to protect the few.
- The law is a way to support the minority.
M2. People should have correct understanding of homosexuals.
- Only with the legal force, it has limits.
- There are some essential parts which can not controlled by law.
- One of essential parts is a conversion of people's recognition.
- There would reform some groups like KKK.
M3. Homosexuals are supposed to have a confidence for themselves.
- Former President of United States, Andrew Jackson said that "One man with courage makes a majority."
- People have no more right to consume happiness without producing it than to consume wealth without producing it.
- This is ultimate solution for this problem.
- Make sure that all's fair in love and war.

Topic, Brainstorming, Thesis

1. Topic
-Homosexual love

2.Brainstorming
-accept culture variety
-people are born with disposition to love both sexes
-can't judge love by real benefit like preservation of species
-homosexual love has existed from long time ago
-people have right to live happily
-repression of homosexual love is conneted with society structure
-HIV is not caused by homosexual love (misunderstand)
-homosexuals should have pride for themselves
-movie, flim also try to help to change out view.
-love is also taste
-notice between different and wrong

3.Thesis Statement
-Homosexual love is accepted in society.

Discussion

hat is the longest composition you've ever written in English? How long was it?
I wrote Movie Review in1 semester in English. The Movie Review is about 1 page.

How long did you work on it?
when I wrote this, I didn't brainstorming so, writting time is short, 2 hours.

Why did you write it?
In English class, Writting Movie Review is homework.

What were some of the difficult you had writting it?
Writting in English is very hard to me. Specifically, grammar, vocabulary, idea etc.

3 photo exercise

I remember when I first met her. Eun Mi introduced Jeong So Yi. At first, she was not smiling, so I was confused. That moment, I thought she was a very cold person. After we got to know each othaer, I reallized that she was not cold but she is good at being prudish. You know, people usually beilieve that prudish is typical

Final Draft

Final Draft
There are some negative things, that's because too many people in Seoul. First, by high population in Seoul, unbalanced development becomes in between country and capital. As you know, welfare, education and government facilities are well organized in Seoul. Whereas, country people have no chance to enjoy those kinds of system as much as Seoul residents. So, if rural people need surgical operations which are required advanced medical skills, they have to come up Seoul. Sometimes, they move to Seoul with passion of their children's good education.
Also, this unbalanced development causes competition. Of course, competition has not always a bad meaning but, overpopulation manipulates bad side of competition. For example, in Seoul, to get an employment, 4000 of people apply for one position.
In the end, these excessive competition brings about selfishness. urban people don't considerate other people any more. Rather, they try to ignore others for their profits. To be winner, people work alone, and they never think about cooperation. This mind makes our society desolated.

Draft(Outline)

1. Unbalance development between coutry and capital.
- Welfare, education, government facilities are well organized in seoul.
- Country people have to come up seoul because surgical operation and high passion of education.
2. Unbalance development cause Competition.
- Because of too much population, competition being grew up.
- To get a employment, 4000 of people come togather toward one position.
3. Competition social cause Selfish.
- People do not give consideration to each other and ignore them.
- To be winner, people work alone and didn't cooperation.

Writing Exercises

10. My favorite animal is a dolphin because he looks free. When he is swimming ins the ocean, I'm so jealous. He could swim anywhere he wants. I think he presents the liberty.

9. I really love going to dance clubs. Dandce clubs let me dance freely. Because everybody is dancing in that places, so I don't need to be concern about other people's eye s. I like listening music too.

8. It's shocking if you didn't know how many people, including young girls and boys, smoke. It's getting a serious problem in our society. More important thing is smoking cigaratte is much more dangerous for young people than adults. It disturbs growth of children.