Final Draft

Final Draft
There are some negative things, that's because too many people in Seoul. First, by high population in Seoul, unbalanced development becomes in between country and capital. As you know, welfare, education and government facilities are well organized in Seoul. Whereas, country people have no chance to enjoy those kinds of system as much as Seoul residents. So, if rural people need surgical operations which are required advanced medical skills, they have to come up Seoul. Sometimes, they move to Seoul with passion of their children's good education.
Also, this unbalanced development causes competition. Of course, competition has not always a bad meaning but, overpopulation manipulates bad side of competition. For example, in Seoul, to get an employment, 4000 of people apply for one position.
In the end, these excessive competition brings about selfishness. urban people don't considerate other people any more. Rather, they try to ignore others for their profits. To be winner, people work alone, and they never think about cooperation. This mind makes our society desolated.