Mother should have a job

1) 3 reasons for your side & 3 examples supporting your ideas
① These days, there's no discrimination between women and men. Now, lots of people recognize equality. Also, mother is just a woman who has her own life, dream. So she has her right to achieve what she pursue and she doesn't need to devote all her life for supporting her family. Additionally, there's a research that woman who doesn't have her own job is more likely to suffer depression than woman who has profession.
② Discrimination and difference aren't same. So we need to accept the difference between women and men. Normally, we can say that woman is more sensitive and delicate than man. So, women are required for some jobs with those kinds of ability.
③ We are not going to say that money is everything. However, without money, no good education for their children, no comfortable life for them. Therefore, we can say that money helps lead their lives the way they want. Also, when it comes to happiness, money isn't everything. But with no money, people usually aren't happy because the life will be not easy.

2) 3 attacks on the other side
① They think that even if women work outside the home, they will still confront with discrimination and disadvantages in the company. But this is not true because there are some institutions for the women against disadvantages like a maternity leave and a special monthly leave for women. And now is the time what really matters in the company is how workers do their job well, not depending on the gender. So it's the appropriate time, not like the past, for the women to work.
② They think women should take care of her child at home, but that's not true. In some cases, woman likes to take care of her child at home and that may be her dream. But, in most cases, woman has her own dream that is not related to her child or her family. People have a dream individually and everyone wants to achieve it. Woman also want to achieve it. It's not fair that she only take care of her children giving up her dream.
③ Women can't have their jobs because men don't help house work. That doesn't make sense anymore in modern society. Men changed a lot than before. Even there's some families that men work and do the housework too. Also, there are lots of good places where you can leave a child for good care. For example, kindergarten, day-care center etc.
④ Children needs mother. That's really true. However, there are lots of teenagers whose mothers stayed home to raise them when they were young, but became bad. Not every child with working mother is rude with no manner. Mother can be with a child all day and teach good manners. But there's no relationship between child's manners and mother's working.

Graph

A) This graph shows Online Shopping US from 2001 to 2003.

B) Sales of clothing and housewares have gone up a lot. because cost of clothing and housewares are more cheaper in online than department stores.

C) Sales of books and DVD's have gone up a little because buying in online is more cheap. but we can download in internet so, a little grow up.

D) However, sales of CDs have gone dwn a little. Because we use MP3 and can download all of music in internet.

E) Over all sales have gone up online shopping developed very well and convenience.

F) To conclude, this graphs show that many people use online shopping very much. Because Today's online system developed very well Also, many people believe internet and feel convenience.

Cheonggyeoicheon

1. The reason that the Cheonggyecheon was covered

During the Japanese colonial period, the Cheonggyecheon went through some changes different from those made in the past.In the post-1920s period, the colonialists announced their plans to cover up the stream on several occasions.However, with the exception of the Taepyeongno-Mugyodong section, which had been covered up in 1937, all those plans could never come true due to the lack of financial resources.By 1945, when the nation was liberated from the Japanese colonial rules, the Cheonggyecheon was filled up with trash, ground and sand swept from the bare mountains and severely contaminated with wastes from shabby makeshift houses built alongside.Thus, the image of Seoul had been affected badly.It appeared that the handiest way to put an end to the multitude of shabby, makeshift houses and the dirty smell was to cover up the stream with concrete.Finally, the work to cover it up with concrete started as quickly as possible by August 1958, with the 136m section near Gwangtonggyo completed in 1955 ahead of the remaining sections.


2.Significance of the project covering up Cheonggyeoicheon

Not only as a problem of Seoul Metropolitan city but also as that of a state, the project covering up Cheonggyeoicheon has historical significance at the point of beginning 21st century. After the completion of the project, Seoul will be changed into the city with environmental friendly and humanistic urban space. This will take an initiative of new paradigm of city management in the 21st century and the opportunity to change the image of Seoul renovated.As out cultural assets are restored, 600 year history of Seoul will be recovered and Seoul will be the city with traditional and modern touch while Cheonggyeoicheon will be the place for relaxation and the tourist attraction in and out of the country.And the surrounding environment will be improved by covering up of Cheonggyeoicheon establishing new trading area and Seoul will be the center of the Northeast Asia, the city with international commerce and the headquarter of finance. The project for restoring environment like this will change the image of Seoul and can inspire dream and hope for the future of the citizens of Seoul.

3. Merit of CheongGyechun after restoration

It is very easy for people to go CheongGyechun because there are many stations nearby.It is the most merit that there is relaxation place of the citizens in the middle of the city after CheongGyechun restoration.And after restoration it catch sight of people and make people happy because there are many events, plendid lights, fractions middle of the water, art works on the wall and birds to see.These days government exhibit light for remind tradition.And It has more important meaning because the light made by the citizens. Although CheongGyechun became more artificial, there is rest of the citizens.


4. The problem of Choung-gye-chon

Choung-gye-chon‘s sudden change arise many problems.First, the short time completion brings about cultural assets loss.Not being prepared Lee Myung Back propels project.So our precious things are damaged.Second, merchants are put out.It isn't that all merchant move to new places.Just a few merchants move.Except them , most merchants lost their job.Third, choung-gye-chon is a place where many cars move.Moreover it is a situation that they don't have appropriate method to prevent car's pollution.Finally, water is polluted again.At choung-gye-chon there is no garage box.So people throw away garage anywhere and it makes water's pollution.These things are problems of choung-gye-chon.

Thinking Outside the Box

What is value from your own culture you would like to share with others?

Korean people respect old people. I think this is good for othrer country to learn.

What is something about yourself that you think would never change, regardless of where you visited?

I think I won't be chaned the attitude to respect other old people.