10. My favorite animal is a dolphin because he looks free. When he is swimming ins the ocean, I'm so jealous. He could swim anywhere he wants. I think he presents the liberty.
9. I really love going to dance clubs. Dandce clubs let me dance freely. Because everybody is dancing in that places, so I don't need to be concern about other people's eye s. I like listening music too.
8. It's shocking if you didn't know how many people, including young girls and boys, smoke. It's getting a serious problem in our society. More important thing is smoking cigaratte is much more dangerous for young people than adults. It disturbs growth of children.
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Hi
Everything looks good so far - keep up the great work.
Geoffrey
PS you need to put your outline on your blog
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