Final Draft
There are some negative things, that's because too many people in Seoul. First, by high population in Seoul, unbalanced development becomes in between country and capital. As you know, welfare, education and government facilities are well organized in Seoul. Whereas, country people have no chance to enjoy those kinds of system as much as Seoul residents. So, if rural people need surgical operations which are required advanced medical skills, they have to come up Seoul. Sometimes, they move to Seoul with passion of their children's good education.
Also, this unbalanced development causes competition. Of course, competition has not always a bad meaning but, overpopulation manipulates bad side of competition. For example, in Seoul, to get an employment, 4000 of people apply for one position.
In the end, these excessive competition brings about selfishness. urban people don't considerate other people any more. Rather, they try to ignore others for their profits. To be winner, people work alone, and they never think about cooperation. This mind makes our society desolated.
2007년 9월 19일 수요일
2007년 9월 18일 화요일
Draft(Outline)
1. Unbalance development between coutry and capital.
- Welfare, education, government facilities are well organized in seoul.
- Country people have to come up seoul because surgical operation and high passion of education.
2. Unbalance development cause Competition.
- Because of too much population, competition being grew up.
- To get a employment, 4000 of people come togather toward one position.
3. Competition social cause Selfish.
- People do not give consideration to each other and ignore them.
- To be winner, people work alone and didn't cooperation.
- Welfare, education, government facilities are well organized in seoul.
- Country people have to come up seoul because surgical operation and high passion of education.
2. Unbalance development cause Competition.
- Because of too much population, competition being grew up.
- To get a employment, 4000 of people come togather toward one position.
3. Competition social cause Selfish.
- People do not give consideration to each other and ignore them.
- To be winner, people work alone and didn't cooperation.
2007년 9월 8일 토요일
Writing Exercises
10. My favorite animal is a dolphin because he looks free. When he is swimming ins the ocean, I'm so jealous. He could swim anywhere he wants. I think he presents the liberty.
9. I really love going to dance clubs. Dandce clubs let me dance freely. Because everybody is dancing in that places, so I don't need to be concern about other people's eye s. I like listening music too.
8. It's shocking if you didn't know how many people, including young girls and boys, smoke. It's getting a serious problem in our society. More important thing is smoking cigaratte is much more dangerous for young people than adults. It disturbs growth of children.
9. I really love going to dance clubs. Dandce clubs let me dance freely. Because everybody is dancing in that places, so I don't need to be concern about other people's eye s. I like listening music too.
8. It's shocking if you didn't know how many people, including young girls and boys, smoke. It's getting a serious problem in our society. More important thing is smoking cigaratte is much more dangerous for young people than adults. It disturbs growth of children.
2007년 6월 1일 금요일
Comprehension Question
1. When was the last earthquake of a similar size?
It is same as 23000 Hiroshima atomic bombs.
2. How many countries did the reasulting tsunami affevt and how many people died?
200000 people died in 11 countries.
3. What prevented the seismic station on Java from issuing a warning?
Because of the lack a telephone line, they couldn't send out warning.
4. Wat reason did the Thai official give for not issuing a warning?
The Thai official thought the data was nto sure enugh and also if they warned it, when it wouldn't have happened, bussiness might have been affected.
5. How were the peopleof Nallavadu saved?
A phone call forem singapole saved them.
6. How did the Oned tribe of Little ANdaman predict the tsunami?
There is a trheir spokin tradition, " huge saking of th ground followed by high wall of water."
7. What wuggests that animals sensed the oncoming tsunami?
Animal bodies were found in higher ground.
8.Why did the Japanese tourists know what to do?
They have some experiences about tsunami.
9. Why did Tilly Smithe scream and alert thouse arond her?
She remembered the scenes which happens before tsunam from her mutinedia geography lesson.
It is same as 23000 Hiroshima atomic bombs.
2. How many countries did the reasulting tsunami affevt and how many people died?
200000 people died in 11 countries.
3. What prevented the seismic station on Java from issuing a warning?
Because of the lack a telephone line, they couldn't send out warning.
4. Wat reason did the Thai official give for not issuing a warning?
The Thai official thought the data was nto sure enugh and also if they warned it, when it wouldn't have happened, bussiness might have been affected.
5. How were the peopleof Nallavadu saved?
A phone call forem singapole saved them.
6. How did the Oned tribe of Little ANdaman predict the tsunami?
There is a trheir spokin tradition, " huge saking of th ground followed by high wall of water."
7. What wuggests that animals sensed the oncoming tsunami?
Animal bodies were found in higher ground.
8.Why did the Japanese tourists know what to do?
They have some experiences about tsunami.
9. Why did Tilly Smithe scream and alert thouse arond her?
She remembered the scenes which happens before tsunam from her mutinedia geography lesson.
2007년 5월 24일 목요일
Mother should have a job
1) 3 reasons for your side & 3 examples supporting your ideas
① These days, there's no discrimination between women and men. Now, lots of people recognize equality. Also, mother is just a woman who has her own life, dream. So she has her right to achieve what she pursue and she doesn't need to devote all her life for supporting her family. Additionally, there's a research that woman who doesn't have her own job is more likely to suffer depression than woman who has profession.
② Discrimination and difference aren't same. So we need to accept the difference between women and men. Normally, we can say that woman is more sensitive and delicate than man. So, women are required for some jobs with those kinds of ability.
③ We are not going to say that money is everything. However, without money, no good education for their children, no comfortable life for them. Therefore, we can say that money helps lead their lives the way they want. Also, when it comes to happiness, money isn't everything. But with no money, people usually aren't happy because the life will be not easy.
2) 3 attacks on the other side
① They think that even if women work outside the home, they will still confront with discrimination and disadvantages in the company. But this is not true because there are some institutions for the women against disadvantages like a maternity leave and a special monthly leave for women. And now is the time what really matters in the company is how workers do their job well, not depending on the gender. So it's the appropriate time, not like the past, for the women to work.
② They think women should take care of her child at home, but that's not true. In some cases, woman likes to take care of her child at home and that may be her dream. But, in most cases, woman has her own dream that is not related to her child or her family. People have a dream individually and everyone wants to achieve it. Woman also want to achieve it. It's not fair that she only take care of her children giving up her dream.
③ Women can't have their jobs because men don't help house work. That doesn't make sense anymore in modern society. Men changed a lot than before. Even there's some families that men work and do the housework too. Also, there are lots of good places where you can leave a child for good care. For example, kindergarten, day-care center etc.
④ Children needs mother. That's really true. However, there are lots of teenagers whose mothers stayed home to raise them when they were young, but became bad. Not every child with working mother is rude with no manner. Mother can be with a child all day and teach good manners. But there's no relationship between child's manners and mother's working.
① These days, there's no discrimination between women and men. Now, lots of people recognize equality. Also, mother is just a woman who has her own life, dream. So she has her right to achieve what she pursue and she doesn't need to devote all her life for supporting her family. Additionally, there's a research that woman who doesn't have her own job is more likely to suffer depression than woman who has profession.
② Discrimination and difference aren't same. So we need to accept the difference between women and men. Normally, we can say that woman is more sensitive and delicate than man. So, women are required for some jobs with those kinds of ability.
③ We are not going to say that money is everything. However, without money, no good education for their children, no comfortable life for them. Therefore, we can say that money helps lead their lives the way they want. Also, when it comes to happiness, money isn't everything. But with no money, people usually aren't happy because the life will be not easy.
2) 3 attacks on the other side
① They think that even if women work outside the home, they will still confront with discrimination and disadvantages in the company. But this is not true because there are some institutions for the women against disadvantages like a maternity leave and a special monthly leave for women. And now is the time what really matters in the company is how workers do their job well, not depending on the gender. So it's the appropriate time, not like the past, for the women to work.
② They think women should take care of her child at home, but that's not true. In some cases, woman likes to take care of her child at home and that may be her dream. But, in most cases, woman has her own dream that is not related to her child or her family. People have a dream individually and everyone wants to achieve it. Woman also want to achieve it. It's not fair that she only take care of her children giving up her dream.
③ Women can't have their jobs because men don't help house work. That doesn't make sense anymore in modern society. Men changed a lot than before. Even there's some families that men work and do the housework too. Also, there are lots of good places where you can leave a child for good care. For example, kindergarten, day-care center etc.
④ Children needs mother. That's really true. However, there are lots of teenagers whose mothers stayed home to raise them when they were young, but became bad. Not every child with working mother is rude with no manner. Mother can be with a child all day and teach good manners. But there's no relationship between child's manners and mother's working.
2007년 5월 14일 월요일
Graph
A) This graph shows Online Shopping US from 2001 to 2003.
B) Sales of clothing and housewares have gone up a lot. because cost of clothing and housewares are more cheaper in online than department stores.
C) Sales of books and DVD's have gone up a little because buying in online is more cheap. but we can download in internet so, a little grow up.
D) However, sales of CDs have gone dwn a little. Because we use MP3 and can download all of music in internet.
E) Over all sales have gone up online shopping developed very well and convenience.
F) To conclude, this graphs show that many people use online shopping very much. Because Today's online system developed very well Also, many people believe internet and feel convenience.
B) Sales of clothing and housewares have gone up a lot. because cost of clothing and housewares are more cheaper in online than department stores.
C) Sales of books and DVD's have gone up a little because buying in online is more cheap. but we can download in internet so, a little grow up.
D) However, sales of CDs have gone dwn a little. Because we use MP3 and can download all of music in internet.
E) Over all sales have gone up online shopping developed very well and convenience.
F) To conclude, this graphs show that many people use online shopping very much. Because Today's online system developed very well Also, many people believe internet and feel convenience.
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