hat is the longest composition you've ever written in English? How long was it?
I wrote Movie Review in1 semester in English. The Movie Review is about 1 page.
How long did you work on it?
when I wrote this, I didn't brainstorming so, writting time is short, 2 hours.
Why did you write it?
In English class, Writting Movie Review is homework.
What were some of the difficult you had writting it?
Writting in English is very hard to me. Specifically, grammar, vocabulary, idea etc.
2007년 10월 1일 월요일
3 photo exercise
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I remember when I first met her. Eun Mi introduced Jeong So Yi. At first, she was not smiling, so I was confused. That moment, I thought she was a very cold person. After we got to know each othaer, I reallized that she was not cold but she is good at being prudish. You know, people usually beilieve that prudish is typical
2007년 9월 19일 수요일
Final Draft
Final Draft
There are some negative things, that's because too many people in Seoul. First, by high population in Seoul, unbalanced development becomes in between country and capital. As you know, welfare, education and government facilities are well organized in Seoul. Whereas, country people have no chance to enjoy those kinds of system as much as Seoul residents. So, if rural people need surgical operations which are required advanced medical skills, they have to come up Seoul. Sometimes, they move to Seoul with passion of their children's good education.
Also, this unbalanced development causes competition. Of course, competition has not always a bad meaning but, overpopulation manipulates bad side of competition. For example, in Seoul, to get an employment, 4000 of people apply for one position.
In the end, these excessive competition brings about selfishness. urban people don't considerate other people any more. Rather, they try to ignore others for their profits. To be winner, people work alone, and they never think about cooperation. This mind makes our society desolated.
There are some negative things, that's because too many people in Seoul. First, by high population in Seoul, unbalanced development becomes in between country and capital. As you know, welfare, education and government facilities are well organized in Seoul. Whereas, country people have no chance to enjoy those kinds of system as much as Seoul residents. So, if rural people need surgical operations which are required advanced medical skills, they have to come up Seoul. Sometimes, they move to Seoul with passion of their children's good education.
Also, this unbalanced development causes competition. Of course, competition has not always a bad meaning but, overpopulation manipulates bad side of competition. For example, in Seoul, to get an employment, 4000 of people apply for one position.
In the end, these excessive competition brings about selfishness. urban people don't considerate other people any more. Rather, they try to ignore others for their profits. To be winner, people work alone, and they never think about cooperation. This mind makes our society desolated.
2007년 9월 18일 화요일
Draft(Outline)
1. Unbalance development between coutry and capital.
- Welfare, education, government facilities are well organized in seoul.
- Country people have to come up seoul because surgical operation and high passion of education.
2. Unbalance development cause Competition.
- Because of too much population, competition being grew up.
- To get a employment, 4000 of people come togather toward one position.
3. Competition social cause Selfish.
- People do not give consideration to each other and ignore them.
- To be winner, people work alone and didn't cooperation.
- Welfare, education, government facilities are well organized in seoul.
- Country people have to come up seoul because surgical operation and high passion of education.
2. Unbalance development cause Competition.
- Because of too much population, competition being grew up.
- To get a employment, 4000 of people come togather toward one position.
3. Competition social cause Selfish.
- People do not give consideration to each other and ignore them.
- To be winner, people work alone and didn't cooperation.
2007년 9월 8일 토요일
Writing Exercises
10. My favorite animal is a dolphin because he looks free. When he is swimming ins the ocean, I'm so jealous. He could swim anywhere he wants. I think he presents the liberty.
9. I really love going to dance clubs. Dandce clubs let me dance freely. Because everybody is dancing in that places, so I don't need to be concern about other people's eye s. I like listening music too.
8. It's shocking if you didn't know how many people, including young girls and boys, smoke. It's getting a serious problem in our society. More important thing is smoking cigaratte is much more dangerous for young people than adults. It disturbs growth of children.
9. I really love going to dance clubs. Dandce clubs let me dance freely. Because everybody is dancing in that places, so I don't need to be concern about other people's eye s. I like listening music too.
8. It's shocking if you didn't know how many people, including young girls and boys, smoke. It's getting a serious problem in our society. More important thing is smoking cigaratte is much more dangerous for young people than adults. It disturbs growth of children.
2007년 6월 1일 금요일
Comprehension Question
1. When was the last earthquake of a similar size?
It is same as 23000 Hiroshima atomic bombs.
2. How many countries did the reasulting tsunami affevt and how many people died?
200000 people died in 11 countries.
3. What prevented the seismic station on Java from issuing a warning?
Because of the lack a telephone line, they couldn't send out warning.
4. Wat reason did the Thai official give for not issuing a warning?
The Thai official thought the data was nto sure enugh and also if they warned it, when it wouldn't have happened, bussiness might have been affected.
5. How were the peopleof Nallavadu saved?
A phone call forem singapole saved them.
6. How did the Oned tribe of Little ANdaman predict the tsunami?
There is a trheir spokin tradition, " huge saking of th ground followed by high wall of water."
7. What wuggests that animals sensed the oncoming tsunami?
Animal bodies were found in higher ground.
8.Why did the Japanese tourists know what to do?
They have some experiences about tsunami.
9. Why did Tilly Smithe scream and alert thouse arond her?
She remembered the scenes which happens before tsunam from her mutinedia geography lesson.
It is same as 23000 Hiroshima atomic bombs.
2. How many countries did the reasulting tsunami affevt and how many people died?
200000 people died in 11 countries.
3. What prevented the seismic station on Java from issuing a warning?
Because of the lack a telephone line, they couldn't send out warning.
4. Wat reason did the Thai official give for not issuing a warning?
The Thai official thought the data was nto sure enugh and also if they warned it, when it wouldn't have happened, bussiness might have been affected.
5. How were the peopleof Nallavadu saved?
A phone call forem singapole saved them.
6. How did the Oned tribe of Little ANdaman predict the tsunami?
There is a trheir spokin tradition, " huge saking of th ground followed by high wall of water."
7. What wuggests that animals sensed the oncoming tsunami?
Animal bodies were found in higher ground.
8.Why did the Japanese tourists know what to do?
They have some experiences about tsunami.
9. Why did Tilly Smithe scream and alert thouse arond her?
She remembered the scenes which happens before tsunam from her mutinedia geography lesson.
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